In Sidoarjo , exactly in Porong be found disaster , we can called "Lumpur Lapindo" , Lumpur Lapindo has been happend about 3 years ago . As we know this accident has been happend because PT Lapindo Brantas Jaya execute drilled until hit center of earth. Because that from inside of earth put outside essence like mud .But be based on research from researcher that expert in sector drilled , boulder mechanic , mud vulcano , and geologist , conclude that lumpur lapindo bursts in sidoarjo not cause by drilled in BJP's well - 1 , Renokenongo village , Porong subdistrict .
Phenomenon of lumpur lapindo make many people curious about the disaster . Not just society of of Indonesia , but also international . Some researcher from foreign curious for doing research about the bursts . The researcher such as Prof.Jim adriano mazzini , got title Phd of hydrocarbon seepage system from university of Aberdeen , and Dr.Amanda Clarke , expert of geology from Arizona state University , USA. They said if the eruption was caused by this earthquake in JOgjakarta, two days later the eruption hapend in Lapindo.
But Victims from the disaster are society in around Sidoarjo . Many people lost their house , their job . And until now the government doesn't give payment for the victims . they Victims don't care the bursts cause by drilled or natural disaster. They just needs payment . With the payment they can survive . Whereas the government has give appointment that the government will be return all of detriment . so i have suggestion for government , do your obligations as government .
Selasa, 16 Juni 2009
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BalasHapusI think your paragraph is good enough
but you can edit some words
vulcano with volcano
subdistrict with sub district .
make with makes
needs with need
By : 120810494G
BalasHapus- I think your paragraph is good enough, but I confuse about your writing because your paragraph there isn't space among first paragraph to second paragraph, etc.
- I find some mistakes in your grammar, I think.
Give me comment in my blog please!
hi...febrina....
BalasHapusi think your paragraph is quite focus and good also,,,
but there are some mistake but that's okay,,,you can practice more and more...
thanks for your comment also...
karina
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i think your paragraph is good enough even you made some mistake on your writing....
BalasHapusbe careful on write a vocabulary,,,because it will be misunderstanding if you write on wrong vocab.....VIVA EDSO
that's all my comment
Rudy 120810491G
your paragraph is good and focus enough,.
BalasHapusI like your writing,.
give me comment too,.
elok 120810486G
i think your paragraph is good enough but i little confuse because you use wrong tenses.
BalasHapusbut i like your topic.
Hy feb...
BalasHapusI think your paragraph is good enough....
But you must be carefull with your tenses....
So usually i can so confused with it...
That's all....
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By : Ria Anggraini.S
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hi ..
BalasHapusi think your paragraph is good and focus ..
but be careful with your tenses ..
i found many mistakes ..
keep in good writing dear ..
Ranti Putri Nastiti
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hi febrina. .
BalasHapusi think your paragraph is good enough, and easy to understand. .
give me comment to
Rico 120810490 G
hay oi...
BalasHapusyour writing is good enough
but there are some mistakes
you should be careful with your tenses before your wrote
that's all from me
kurnia suci (120810488G)
thanks for your comment guys ..
BalasHapusi will repair my mistake ..