Have you ever visited in Surabaya zoo ??
Surabaya zoo is one of the many tourism place in Capetown Surabaya in east java province.It is an amazing tourist to visit.Surabaya Zoo located in Setail street 1 Surabaya ( Wonokromo - beside Joyoboyo station area ). That place be located in center of Surabaya city. So we can find that place with easy.
Actually Surabaya Zoo is the greatest zoo in Southeast Asia.It's about 10 hectare i think.Beside that Surabaya zoo also has became the complete zoo in Indonesia.There are many animal from domestic or foreign countries such as some place for birds,fresh water aquarium,night animal,various animal , and etc. Recently Surabaya zoo has just got animals from Japan But unfortunately some animal was die in trip to Surabaya.
Usually in some place in there you can find a few people take a picture with snake or simpanse.But its not gratis,you have to pay if you want to take a picture with some animal.
you can also ride elephant and camel if you have bravery.The Zoo is surrounded by trees and The middle of the zoo there are river.In the river you can ride boat or water bicycle.
fortunately if you visited on Sunday,you can find circus by animal,and we can join with them.
Surabaya zoo is very suitable for families that spend their holiday.In there we can join flying fox.
Surabaya zoo also become medium education.Some students from school usually comes to Surabaya Zoo to study about animal or condition geography in there.
the scenery of zoo is very beautiful with many tress and plants,and the flowers put in order with neat and nice.if you want to come to there, don't more than 5 p.m.,Because Surabaya Zoo has already close.so you better come to there about 9 a.m .
at the last surabaya is really beautiful with a spectacular animals and scenery.
Surabaya zoo is one of the many tourism place in Capetown Surabaya in east java province.It is an amazing tourist to visit.Surabaya Zoo located in Setail street 1 Surabaya ( Wonokromo - beside Joyoboyo station area ). That place be located in center of Surabaya city. So we can find that place with easy.
Actually Surabaya Zoo is the greatest zoo in Southeast Asia.It's about 10 hectare i think.Beside that Surabaya zoo also has became the complete zoo in Indonesia.There are many animal from domestic or foreign countries such as some place for birds,fresh water aquarium,night animal,various animal , and etc. Recently Surabaya zoo has just got animals from Japan But unfortunately some animal was die in trip to Surabaya.
Usually in some place in there you can find a few people take a picture with snake or simpanse.But its not gratis,you have to pay if you want to take a picture with some animal.
you can also ride elephant and camel if you have bravery.The Zoo is surrounded by trees and The middle of the zoo there are river.In the river you can ride boat or water bicycle.
fortunately if you visited on Sunday,you can find circus by animal,and we can join with them.
Surabaya zoo is very suitable for families that spend their holiday.In there we can join flying fox.
Surabaya zoo also become medium education.Some students from school usually comes to Surabaya Zoo to study about animal or condition geography in there.
the scenery of zoo is very beautiful with many tress and plants,and the flowers put in order with neat and nice.if you want to come to there, don't more than 5 p.m.,Because Surabaya Zoo has already close.so you better come to there about 9 a.m .
at the last surabaya is really beautiful with a spectacular animals and scenery.
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i think your paragraph is good .
BalasHapusbut i found some mistakes from your paragraph .
"It is an amazing tourist to visit" its should be amazing tourist object to visit .
"That place be located in center of Surabaya city" its should be that place is located in ...
"But its not gratis" should be but its not free . ithink .
*you forget to typed the plural nouns wit 's' or 'es'...
"10 hectare" its should be 10 hectares .
"many animal" should be many animals .
"some animal" should be some animals .
ithink thats enough .
you describe many things about surabaya zoo .
and its good too .
hello febrina..
BalasHapusI think your paragraph is good enough
but I found some mistakes from your paragraph
But so far,your writing not too bad,enough...
You ready describe many things about surabaya zoo
And its good for me
That's all...
120810492G
i think your paragraph is good enough, but maybe same like the others i found some mistakes in your paragraph.
BalasHapusMaybe next time you can do better.
i think your paragraph is enough good
BalasHapusyou tell and describe about surabaya zoo
but you should describe more animal and many things in surabaya zoo...
Well,,
BalasHapusYour writing is good I think.
But I found some mistakes in your assignment,
For example:
-It's an amazing tourist to visit, it should be "It's an amazing tourism object to visit".
-You didn't put 's' or 'es' in plural word.
-It's not gratis, it should be"It's not free"
-And next time I want you to be more careful in writing.
But so far,your writing is clear.
You described it well.
Commented by : Rulyana (120810493 G)
you really loved with surabaya..
BalasHapusI like your writing,.
but,.you make mistake in a word,.
" but its not gratis..???
it should " but its not free",..
give me comment too,..thanks
Elok Lailiya (120810486G)
your paragraph good enough and you describe many thing about that but you don't describe how tahat place..
BalasHapusand you don't use "s" or "es on the plural words
thanks
HI.. Febri!! :)
BalasHapusI think your paragraph is good.
But you forget to describe what kind of animals there.
It can make the reader bored and not interested if you forget to describe that.
There are a lot of mistakes on your paragraph,so try to change that.
Don't forget to give me comment..
Commented by : Pratiwi Ramandita 120810487G
thanks for your comments guys ..
BalasHapusi hope i will better to write paragraph again ..
your paragraph is good enough. .
BalasHapusbut i agree with ranti and ought to after pullstop, you must give space.
commented by : Rico ( 120810490 G )